Age/Gender: 18, Male
Location: the hood
Job: Eating trail mix
I really don't have much to say, I like first person shooters like Counter strike: source, team fortress 2 , half life 2, left 4 dead, and so on. my screen name on online fps is {CSS}sonicno2. G.I.R. ROCKS!!! that is all.
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Latest Flash Reviews
well, this is another flash consisting of sprites, which I'm not particularly fond of, but its definitely good for something to work with on a beginning project. One huge problem that I see in this, is the use of sprites taken from what appears to be Google image, and placed on a flash project. now as much as one would need help on their fist project, this is deriving from the integrity of the flash. Honestly man, you didn't even bother to remove the background from the Images you used. one more thing I can see is the shoddy animation. I can only assume you will improve over time, but for now I would suggest using higher frame counts, and less time between frames for more fluid animation.
But I digress, you didn't do too badly on this, and I can see its quite obvious you did quite a bit on trying to build a story of sorts, so you get some points towards you for that. and the jokes you put in were a treat, so overall, this is quite a nice beginners flash, and over time your technique should develop, and I hope to see some of your future work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback! And im not gunna lie, when i made this i was pretty noobish at flash stuff(still am i think :).) I wont use it as an excuse as to why the animation was shotty, but 1. i only had about 30 days to work on this, and 2. i dont know how to change fps...:(. ( But Like i said, i wont use that as an excuse.) Truthfully I wasnt going to even put this on NG. Since it was my first(i got the 30 day trial period of Adobe, and before i knew it i got this.) I know i def should have done some major editing too but i kinda ran out of time. The reason i put it on NG was so i could get some feedback from people. And ive gotten some thats very helpful at that. anyway im glad you didnt find i did too bad on this, and that you found some of the jokes abit humorous. and if i ever make a part 2 im gunna use the school computers(they have macromedia :). and its not a trial version :).) thanks for the feedback! Oh i didnt google image the sprites. i used spriteresources, and Paint...i tried to get as little white as possible, but now i understand you gutta do some MAJOR zooming( Cant belive i didnt figure that out, Can you sa NOOB!? Lol) anyway the feedback you gave me will definately help me out, Thanks!
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I must say, you've animated this quite nicely, but thats to be expected from the usage of sprites. I'm not one to demean sprites, but I don't encourage it either. To me it lacks creativity. besides that, the "Who would win in a fight to the death?" scenario has become an overused concept and often, a repetitive one, seeing as most of them pan out as if they were directly from episodes of Dragon ball.
Please take this as helpful criticism rather than meaningless mockery.
Author's Response:
I've already given up Google searching graphics and moved completely into pixel animation, you wont be seeing another SMBZ inspired "fight to the death" from me for a LOOONG time
also this is more of a test project to see what I could do with tweens at the time
check out my fathers day project
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The first scene was the best out of the lot, by a long shot. I cant say much for the animation, but the joke was funny, and the voice acting was decent. and It Was much like the Godfather, which made me grin, especially the ending. its I cant say much for the other animations, but the first one really made this worth watching.
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Latest Audio Reviews
I must say, this is another nice piece for your nice little collection of 8-bit masterpieces you have. Perhaps Its due to my tastes, but I believe this song's build up has the feeling best captured by cellos, and violins and other such instruments. I love the almost inspirational feel I get from this song. Might I ask what program(s) you used in the making of your music? This is definitely a project I'd love to begin with.
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great job man! your a talented voice actor, and pretty funny too
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great track man, its got a great beat and rhythm. and i cant help but think of Time Crisis or Deus ex when listening to this. I cant figure out why. o.O still great song and please make more!
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