TheFreedMan

Age/Gender: 18, Male
Location: the hood
Job: Eating trail mix

I really don't have much to say, I like first person shooters like Counter strike: source, team fortress 2 , half life 2, left 4 dead, and so on. my screen name on online fps is {CSS}sonicno2. G.I.R. ROCKS!!! that is all.

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Score: 5
Super Smash Battle

"I can tell you at least tried"

submission: Super Smash Battle
date: November 11, 2009

well, this is another flash consisting of sprites, which I'm not particularly fond of, but its definitely good for something to work with on a beginning project. One huge problem that I see in this, is the use of sprites taken from what appears to be Google image, and placed on a flash project. now as much as one would need help on their fist project, this is deriving from the integrity of the flash. Honestly man, you didn't even bother to remove the background from the Images you used. one more thing I can see is the shoddy animation. I can only assume you will improve over time, but for now I would suggest using higher frame counts, and less time between frames for more fluid animation.

But I digress, you didn't do too badly on this, and I can see its quite obvious you did quite a bit on trying to build a story of sorts, so you get some points towards you for that. and the jokes you put in were a treat, so overall, this is quite a nice beginners flash, and over time your technique should develop, and I hope to see some of your future work!

November 14, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback! And im not gunna lie, when i made this i was pretty noobish at flash stuff(still am i think :).) I wont use it as an excuse as to why the animation was shotty, but 1. i only had about 30 days to work on this, and 2. i dont know how to change fps...:(. ( But Like i said, i wont use that as an excuse.) Truthfully I wasnt going to even put this on NG. Since it was my first(i got the 30 day trial period of Adobe, and before i knew it i got this.) I know i def should have done some major editing too but i kinda ran out of time. The reason i put it on NG was so i could get some feedback from people. And ive gotten some thats very helpful at that. anyway im glad you didnt find i did too bad on this, and that you found some of the jokes abit humorous. and if i ever make a part 2 im gunna use the school computers(they have macromedia :). and its not a trial version :).) thanks for the feedback! Oh i didnt google image the sprites. i used spriteresources, and Paint...i tried to get as little white as possible, but now i understand you gutta do some MAJOR zooming( Cant belive i didnt figure that out, Can you sa NOOB!? Lol) anyway the feedback you gave me will definately help me out, Thanks!

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Score: 4
CODE GREEN

"Good, but pretty un-inspired"

submission: CODE GREEN
date: September 17, 2009

I must say, you've animated this quite nicely, but thats to be expected from the usage of sprites. I'm not one to demean sprites, but I don't encourage it either. To me it lacks creativity. besides that, the "Who would win in a fight to the death?" scenario has become an overused concept and often, a repetitive one, seeing as most of them pan out as if they were directly from episodes of Dragon ball.

Please take this as helpful criticism rather than meaningless mockery.

September 18, 2009

Author's Response:

I've already given up Google searching graphics and moved completely into pixel animation, you wont be seeing another SMBZ inspired "fight to the death" from me for a LOOONG time

also this is more of a test project to see what I could do with tweens at the time
check out my fathers day project

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Score: 7
Men's Wearhouse Volume 1

"That was great"

date: August 11, 2009

The first scene was the best out of the lot, by a long shot. I cant say much for the animation, but the joke was funny, and the voice acting was decent. and It Was much like the Godfather, which made me grin, especially the ending. its I cant say much for the other animations, but the first one really made this worth watching.

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Score: 4
Syndication Ep. 1

"What have you done to flash?"

submission: Syndication Ep. 1
date: August 11, 2009

This is Perfect example of a poorly assembled heap of bad drawings and animation, (with the exception of f0d, ixintro, and threestar's contributions) that give new grounds a bad name. It seems that Groups like the kitty krew and this Group, seem to submit garbage and people eat it up!

You get a four, symbolizing the scenes that were worth watching.

August 12, 2009

Author's Response:

You get an F, symbolizing what I did to your mother the other night.

She gets a five, symbolizing the five dollars she wasn't worth.

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Score: 10
Butt Fight: Raw

"ah, good times"

submission: Butt Fight: Raw
date: June 8, 2009

I does not get better than this, in full screen mode watching it for endless hours of the day, so majestic and amazing. I'm in total bliss.

June 11, 2009

Author's Response:

You are a scholar and a gentleman

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Score: 8
newgrounds history quiz

"not bad"

date: May 28, 2009

Really good quiz, I learned quite a bit from this actually, but the music continues even if you fail the quiz and a new one starts, and I failed quite a lot, so at some point it just started sounding like noise, to about the point where I thought my speakers were about to explode, I had a good laugh about that, but good job and keep up the good work!

May 30, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks this was actually one of my first flash quizzes i made when i was still learning how to program but i gave up on programming and am now an artist with a game coming out soon so check it out sometime.

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Score: 10
You Have To Burn The Rope

"man this is impossible!"

date: May 28, 2009

I just can't finish the final boss, I mean I can get past the automated turret defense mechanism, but the mines always take out so much of my health so that by the time I get to the mounted laser cannon I'm basically screwed, not to mention the homing missiles and the rabid dogs. You gotta make this game easier man, Its just too hard!

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Score: 10
Epic Battle Fantasy

"Nice job man"

date: May 10, 2009

I had a lot of fun playing through this, the Drawings are amazing, and the animation is really clean, and I have only one simple question: Is it even POSSIBLE to complete this on epic? I mean Come on! Its about as hard to survive epic mode as Running through a mine-field! On Fire! Hell, the mine-field's on fire! With one foot caught in a bear trap! augh you get my point. But I did enjoy bouncing the girl's boobs. that was fun =P

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Score: 10
Darnell's Recount

"this game is AMAZING"

submission: Darnell's Recount
date: May 9, 2009

I had a lot of fun playing through this game, I love the combos, and the art style is pretty cool. I have to say though, The final boss is hard as hell, till you realize the
Ultimate move: the fire spin.
also, where can I find the music for the secret rooms? I cant seem to find the song.

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Score: 8
FAUX: Chapter I

"man, this is good"

submission: FAUX: Chapter I
date: April 30, 2009

the story is great, and the music fits the mood and tone of the story well, but I cant say that the character expressions really fit what the character is saying at times. Even with those minor flaws, the artwork is great.

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